Thursday, October 22, 2009

The Go-Kart Race

Wilma and Biff saw a notice and it was about a go-kart race. Biff and Wilma were excited. They told mum about the race and they made a new go-kart. Mum took the children to a park. There was a hill in the park and it was a good place to try the new go-kart. Everyone had a go, also everyone said “It's brilliant!” Wilma saw another go-kart. “It's Anneeena, she's got a go-kart too.” Wilma and Anneena had a race. The go-kart raced down the hill. Anneena was in front but suddenly, a dog ran in front of Anneena, so her go-kart crashed into a bush and Wilma crashed into Anneena. Wilma's front wheels were bent. Anneena's go-kart was broken. So everyone was upset. The mums and dads made a new go-kart. They made one go-kart out of two. It's name was Shilver Bullet. The children liked the new one. It was the day of the race and it was the time for the race. Everyone shouted and cheered. Anneena went fast but she didn't win. However, Shilver Bullet did win a prize. It was the best-looking go-kart. “Hooray!” everyone cheered. (192 words)

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