Essay 2 revised My favorite animal

I'll talk about my favorite animal. My favorite animal is dogs. I think are very intelligent, kind and friendly. I love dogs so much and I have a dog as my family. His name is Atom and he is the Pembroke Welsh Corgi. The Pembroke Welsh Corgi is as known as Queen Elizabeth Ⅱ's pet dog. Atom is eleven years old now, but he is very cheerful. When I was a child, I didn't like dogs because they bark and I always felt fear. However, since I had Atom, I became a lover of dogs. I love Atom so much. He is very intelligent, on the other hand, he is a scatterbrain, but he is so cute. When I have free time, I often play with him. He can play soccer well. He always makes me happy. If I have a chance, I want to have many kinds of dogs. Of course I want to have the Pembroke Welsh Corgi again, moreover I want to have the Cavalier King Charles Spaniel, the Miniature Schnauzer, the Bernese Mountain Dog, the Borzoi, and so on. They are all cute and cool! Another animal I like is bears. Bears are very strong and big, so sometimes dangerous. However, bears that are in the zoo are not dangerous. When I was a child, I often went to the zoo and saw many bears. They are very cute, because if they want feed, they raise their hands and beckon many times. It looks so cute. My favorite characters Winnie-the-pooh and Duffy are bears, this is one of reasons that I like bears. They are so cute, aren't they? I have many goods of them. If it is possible I want to have a little bear someday. Also I like elephants. Elephants are very but they are very tender. I like their little eyes. I think they have graceful eyes. I often see the spectacle that people ride on the elephant, I really want to do it! (332 words)